Flying Phineas Animation

Oh wow... this is my first critique on anything... hopefully my english teacher won't see this and dock me points on my grade for not being in-depth enough with this... <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> just kidding. but anywho... overall, I love this. WAY more than I could ever do since I've never done any animations before (but I WANT to! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>)...

First of all, the overall animation is great. to me, you could've added more detail (like his expression or something) and maybe colored this. But i can understand if you didn't wanna take the extra time. Phineas could've crouched down a little more and maybe his head could've been tilted upward a little to make it look like he REALLY wanted to fly up into the air. And maybe on his takeoff you could've made his wings beat down a little more to make it look a little more powerful. And maybe added those little motion lines coming out from under Phinny to add some more pop to it...

Other than those little details, I love this. inspires me even more to make some moving images of my OCs and scenes from my fanfictions, that's for sure! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>